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A Pony Tale Pt. 4

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A Pony Tale Pt. 4

The next morning Daniel met up with Derpy and the 2 headed to the hospital.  When they got there Fluttershy was outside talking to Spike, Angel was there as well her fur apparently cleaned.  The groups exchanged greeting and Daniel spoke up.

"Why did you attack us yesterday?" Daniel demanded.

Daniel was not happy about being attack by the pony he set out to save.  Fluttershy backed off, frightened she began to mutter.

"I can't hear you." said Daniel.

Fluttershy whimpered.

"Stop it Daniel." said Spike.

"Look I want to know what happened to make her attack." said Daniel.

"She was cursed." said Spike.

"Cursed?" asked Daniel.

"Yes." answered Fluttershy.

"Can you explain?" asked Daniel.

Fluttershy took a deep breath.

"You see, a dark force is cursing ponys, when cursed the pony loses control over themselves."  answered Fluttershy.

"So they become unwilling slaves?" asked Daniel.

"Yes." answered Fluttershy.

"Can you tell us anything else about the curse?" asked Daniel.

"Yes, the cursed ponys have their manes and eyes turn blood red so the others know who to attack.  The cursed ponys also have their abilities enhanced beyond their normal capabilities making them difficult to defeat.  The only way to reverse this is to defeat them in a fight and have them look at somepony they care about.  Once the pony is cured he or she can never be cursed again." answered Fluttershy.

"I see, so when we beat you you turned back to normal because you care for Pinkie?" asked Daniel.

"Yes." answered Fluttershy.

"That dark pony must have a lot of power to do this."  said Daniel.

"The dark pony is not responsible she is just another victim, only one pony can curse ponys like this." said Fluttershy.

"Who?" asked Daniel.

Fluttershy began to whimper, after a few moments she cries.

"I can't say it, I'm sorry, just thinking about that name just makes me *sniff*." said Fluttershy.

Daniel puts his hoof on Fluttershys back.

"There there now, it's ok." said Daniel.

"What's our next move?" asked Derpy.

Daniel realized he forgot to ask Spike about the new around town.

"Any news Spike?" asked Daniel.

"Nope, sorry." answered Spike.

Suddenly a voice calls out.

"Are you the one whose saving ponys?" asked the voice.

Daniel turned around, in front of him is a blue unicorn, she is wearing a purple pointed hat decorated with blue and yellow stars and a matching cape with a button shaped like a gemstone.

"Yes." answered Daniel.

"Well The Great and Powerful Trixie knows where one of your friends is." said the unicorn.

"Cool, where is she?" asked Daniel.

"What are you up to Trixie?" asked Spike.

"The Great and Powerful Trixie is not up to anything, I just want to help, that`s all." answered Trixie.

"And maybe restore you image after the incident with the ursa minor while you're at it?" asked Spike.

Trixie begins to get nervous.

"Well, uh..."

"Enough." said Daniel.

Trixie breaths a sigh of relief.

"You said you know where one of the kidnapped ponys are, where is this pony?" asked Daniel.

Trixie points to a mountain in the distance.

"See that mountain with the cave near the top?  I saw a pony carrying another pony up there." answered Trixie.

"Rainbow Dash and Pinkie.  Alright, let's go." said Daniel.

"The Great and Powerful Trixie would like to accompany you to the mountain." said Trixie.

"Daniel, Trixie is a fraud, her magic is just one big show.  She would only get in the way." said Spike.

"That's not true.  The Great and Powerful Trixie is the best magician in all of Equestria." said Trixie.

Daniel was confused, he could sense that Trixie had powerful magic but what if Spike was right.

"Show me." said Daniel.

"Very well." said Trixie.

Trixie starts doing a bunch of flashy magic tricks.  Daniel was not convinced though.

"I can see you're talented at putting on a show but I need to know how much damage you can do." said Daniel.

Trixie paused for a moment.  She charges up for a moment and hits a nearby tree with a burst of magic, knocking it down.

"See, The Great and Powerful Trixie can do damage with her magic." said Trixie.

"It also helped that the tree you knocked down was dead and beginning to rot." said Daniel.

"See Daniel, Trixie is a fraud." said Spike.

"However, your magic can do some damage it seems.  Let's go." said Daniel.

"The Great and Powerful Trixie complements you on your wise decision." said Trixie.

"You in Fluttershy?" asked Daniel.

"Ok, I'll help." said Fluttershy.

Daniel can tell Fluttershy is really nervous.

"Are you sure?" asked Daniel.

"Yes." said Fluttershy.

The group set out for the mountain.  Meanwhile at the base of another mountain.

"You sure there is a pony in this mountain?" asked Apple Bloom.

"Absolutely." said Scootaloo.

"Why are we here again?" asked Sweetie Belle.

"That guy won't let us help so we're finding a pony to save ourselves." answered Scootaloo.

They looked up at the mountain, the mountain has a cavern inside.

"Come on, lets go in." said Apple Bloom.

"What makes you think a pony needs saving in here anyway?: asked Sweetie Belle.

"What better place to hide somepony?" said Scootaloo.

"oooh..." said Sweetie Belle.

The CMC went into the cave in the mountainside.

"I wonder what a hero cutie mark would look like." said Apple Bloom.

"Maybe it'll be a pony in a cape." said Sweetie Belle.

The CMC continued into the cavern, after walking for hours the reach a large room.  Suddenly a voice calls out.

"So you have come to save your friend?" called the voice.

"That's right." said Apple Bloom.

"Than face me." called the voice.

Suddenly a giant spider appears.

BATTLE

Apple Bloom HP: 25
Scootaloo HP: 20
Sweetie Belle HP: 20
VS.
Giant spider HP: 50

Apple Bloom kicks Giant spider (-10 HP 40 left)
Scootaloo charges Giant spider (-5 HP 35 left)
Sweetie Belle charges Giant (-5 HP 30 left)
Giant spider bites Apple Bloom (-10 HP 15 left)
Apple Bloom kicks Giant spider (-10 HP 20 left)
Scootaloo charges Giant spider (-5 HP 15 left)
Sweetie Belle charges Giant spider (-5 HP 10 left)
Giant spider bites Scootaloo (-10 HP 10 left)
Apple Bloom kicks Giant spider (-10 HP KO)

The giant spider explodes.

"We did it." shouted Apple Bloom.

"Did you really think it would be that easy?" asked the voice.

"Hows this possible?  We just kicked your flank." said Scootaloo.

"The only flank you kicked was that of a weakling of a minion." said the voice.

"If you're so tough, show yourself and prove it." demanded Sweetie Belle.

"Very well." said the voice.

A large shadow looms over the CMC.

"No, but how, why?" asks Apple Bloom.

Meanwhile back with Daniels group.

"And then I pounced on the thief and held him down, when the authorities arrived they took him away, and then my cutie mark appeared." said Daniel.

"Wow." said Derpy.

"The Great and Powerful Trixie wants to know how much farther it is." said Trixie.

"We're here." said Daniel.

They were in front of a large cave at the peak of the mountain.

"Hello?" said Fluttershy.

Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie appeared from the cave.  Pinkie was cursed her mane and eyes both were blood red.

"So you bunch made it I see" said Rainbow Dash.

"He he, I'm going to bake you into cupcakes." said Pinkie.

BATTLE

Daniel HP: 300
Derpy HP: 275
Fluttershy HP: 250
Trixie HP: 250
VS.
Cursed Rainbow Dash HP: 500
Cursed Pinkie HP: 450

Daniel: focus fire, everypony takes the same target.
Cursed Rainbow Dash dashes by and kicks Daniel from behind (-40 HP 260 left)
Derpy threw a stale muffin at Cursed Pinkie (-50 HP 400 left)
Daniel kicks Cursed Pinkie twice (-30 HP)(-30 HP 340 left)
Trixie uses her magic to throw Cursed Pinkie at Cursed Rainbow Dash (both -40 Cursed Pinkie 300 left, Cursed Rainbow Dash 460 left)
Cursed Pinkie fires her party canon at Trixie (-50 HP 200 left)
Cursed Rainbow Dash charges Derpy (-40 HP 235 left)
Daniel: I have an idea *whispers*
Fluttershy: Got it.
Derpy: Got it.
Derpy and Fluttershy airlift Daniel and toss him behind Cursed Pinkie, surrounding her they kick her all at once (-175 HP 25 left)
Trixie sends a burst of magic at Pinkie (-40 HP KO)
Rainbow Dash grabs a storm cloud and hits Fluttershy with a lightning bolt (-50 HP 200 left)
Fluttershy kicks Cursed Rainbow Dash (-40 HP)
Derpy kicks Cursed Rainbow Dash twice (-30 HP)(-30 HP 360 left)
Daniel: When did you start kicking twice in one move like that?
Derpy: I've been watching you Daniel.
Daniel kicks Cursed Rainbow Dash twice (-30 HP)(-30 HP 300 left)
Trixie fires a burst of magic at Cursed Rainbow Dash but misses.
Cursed Rainbow Dash: Missed me.
The shot hits a stalactite which falls on Cursed Rainbow Dash (-200 HP 100 left)
Trixie: You were saying?
Cursed Rainbow Dash charges Trixie (-50 HP 150 left)
Fluttershy charges Cursed Rainbow Dash (-50 HP 50 left)
Derpy throws a stale muffin at Cursed Rainbow Dash (-50 HP KO)

The 2 pegasi return to normal and collapse.

"Let's take them back." said Daniel.

End of part 4
Part 4 of A Pony Tale. Questions are answered and we have 2 fights. Pinkie and Rainbow Dash are saved but how are the CMC going to get out of the mess their in, where are the other ponys being kept, and who is this dark pony?

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Lizyos's avatar
This is pretty good, I love how you do the little fight things too :aww: